考博作文正面陈述问题写作

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对某个生活或卫生习惯的告戒或提示类的文章
一、 正面陈述问题
一、第一段的第一句， 也就是全文的主题句（topic sentence of the whole summary）：
用中文总结出来一句： 本文揭示了/说明了一个问题。。。：
This article reveals that _____________ has become one of the prominent issues which are closely related with people’s health/ of the modern Chinese society/in the area of antibiotics alone. 如早餐问题已经成为了与人们健康息息相关的突出问题；或也可以说成了社会问题；也可以说成了某个领域的问题(抗生素领域)。
Most people take it for granted that ____ should _____. However, it is not always the case. 很多人都想当然地认为什么应该怎么样。然而事实并非如此。 （这几个句子要看情况，并不是都有用的，如果文章中出现了这样的句子“很多人都想当然觉得早餐不是那么重要- Most people take it for granted that breakfast is not significant”，但是实际上不是这样的，那么就可以用到这个句子） Scientists found that these problems are actually caused by _irrational diets and eating habits__.  （科学家们发现这些问题是由什么引起的，如老年人的心脏血管等问题，然而实际上是因为不当饮食习惯造成的） This is indicated in a survey recently made in shanghai by who.（该观点由谁在上海做的一个调查报告中可以得出），也就是如果你这篇文章是由卫生部的报告（report）中得出的，或指出的，那么就可以这么写。如果并是的，那么这个句子可以不写。

二、第二段

Firstly, balanced /regular …. is especially good for the health of …首先，平衡什么的饮食尤其对什么好。
In addition, … should be suggested to… , largely because it helps people to …
此外，什么应该多选用于干什么，主要是因为它帮助人们什么。
Furthermore, it is helpful to reduce the possibilities of being in the danger of suffering from cardiovascular diseases.
再者，它能帮助减少患心血管疾病的危险的几率。
Finally, but not the least point is that fat and oily food usually attribute to cardiovascular diseases. Therefore, it is better to take in light food instead of fat and oily food.
最后，但并非最后一点就是油腻的食物常导致心血管疾病， 所以应该选用油份较少的食物而不是过分油腻的食物。
It commonly leads to cardiovascular diseases.
It usually attributes to cardiovascular diseases.
常常导致心血管疾病.

三、第三段

In general, a balanced diet, more vegetable food instead of fat food is of the first significance to the health of the aged and a long life.
总而言之，一个平衡的饮食，多吃蔬菜而少吃油腻的食物是对老人来说是保持健康长寿的最重要的因素。
In general, a regular habit of work and rest, more high-quality of sleeping instead of staying up late is of the first significance to the health of people and a long life.
总而言之，一个规律的作息，高质量的睡眠而少熬夜是对人们来说是保持健康长寿的最重要的因素。