考研阅卷老师谈：小作文评分标准分析(下)

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考研阅卷老师谈：小作文评分标准分析
   

    2006年小作文真题：
   
    Directions: You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry your own plan.
    Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. You don’t need to write the address.
   
    从2006年小作文来看，内容仍为信函，指示语的第二部分与2005年完全相同。因此在写作时只需遵循书信写作的基本格式，在主体部分涵盖要点即可。2006年的求助信要点如下：
    1．求助理由（开门见山）：I am writing this letter to ask if you could help me find a child in your area as a beneficiary of Project Hope.
    2．具体要求：I hope to offer help to a school-aged girl from a poor family, for I know that girls are often deprived of their rights of schooling due to poverty.

    3．如何进行帮助：I will send 1,000 to the girl by mail every term once I can get specific information about her.
   
    2007年小作文真题：
   
    Directions: Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
    Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. You don’t need to write the address.
    2007年小作文仍旧是信函写作，从内容上看是一封建议信，写作思路与05、06年相同。
   
    2008年小作文真题：
   
    Directions: You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to
    1) make an apology, and
    2) suggest a solution.
    Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. You don’t need to write the address.
    2008小作文与2005年一样，写一封道歉信。因此写作格式与思路相同，只需把主体部分内容进行改变。2008年的道歉信主体部分主要涵盖两大要点：
    1．道歉：I am awfully sorry that I forgot to return your music CD to you.
    2．解释（为什么没有归还CD，理由有道理即可）：When I was packing, I confused your CD with mine and put it in my luggage. Then it was not until I arrived home and unpacked my belongings that I discovered your CD right in my suitcase.
    3．提出解决方法：I will post you the CD tomorrow and again I sincerely hope that you could accept my apologies.