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发表于 2005-12-4 15:58:52 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
议论文十大功能段落示例



1.     现象引入段



It is commonly said that one’s first impression of a person is the most important one , and this is certainly true when applied to job interviews. This is because the manager often has to interview a dozen or more candidates in the space of only one or two hours, allotting no more than a few minutes to each.. Therefore, it is vital for the interviewee to make the best possible impression on his prospective employer during the interview.



2.     图画描述段



The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different circumstances. As is shown in the first cartoon, the flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse which shelters it from the threatening lightning and storm. With proper temperature, moisture and fertilizer, the flower is growing in full bloom. On the contrary, when removed from the greenhouse and exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with the petals cast on the ground.



3.     图表描述段



According to the figures given in the table, there was an obvious growth in the number of foreigners entering China between 1996 and 1997. Take one of China’s neighbouring countries for example : Japanese, who topped the list twice, went up steadily from 1.548 million in 1996 to 1.528 million in 1997. People from geographically remote countries like America also increased within these two years. Compared with the visitors from America in 1996, the number of Americans rose dramatically by 40,000 by the end of 1997.



4.     观点阐述段



Should the development of private cars be encouraged or restricted in China? To judge this issue, we should look at three aspects: What are the advantages of private cars; what are their disadvantages; and is China ready for the free development of private cars?



5.     利弊说明段



Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car---if he or she can afford it. Having a car of your own means no more traveling to work on crowded buses or subway trains, and you can drop off the children at school on the way. Moreover, it also means that you can enjoy the weekends and holidays better, because with a car you can go to places where the regular buses and trains do not go, and so you can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds.



6.     意义阐释段



The purpose of this picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease of ocean resources. Owing to overfishing, the number of fishes has obviously decreased. If we let this situation go as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the future. By that time, our environment will suffer a great destruction.



7.     原因阐释段



Fake products are rampant on the market today for the following reasons. To profiteer enormously, quite a few firms produce shoddy goods. These producers do not take into account the quality of their products, but exaggerate their functions or effects. To make easy money, a number of stores knowingly sell counterfeit items. These sellers do not care whether or not the counterfeit items may cause damage to property and injury or even death to individuals, but fix their eyes on the money they can get from their customers.



8.     举例说明段



For instance, when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his life. Or when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish her schooling and change her life, you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.



9.     趋势预测



However, the following figures indicate that the number of smokers is decreasing: The total value of tobacco production worldwide was 14.364 billion pounds in 1994, but this had dropped to 14.2 billion pounds by 1995. At the same time, many countries have passed laws forbidding smoking in public places, and there is a global campaign to dissuade people from smoking. Therefore, I think that tobacco consumption will definitely decrease in the years to come.



10.  解决办法



Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings. On the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to given their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems. Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personality and ability, and only in this way can they become winners in this competitive world.



大作文模班



模板一:图画作文



This illustration depicts__________ (图画中的人物)Ving, with_________________(补充说明). Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to_____________(进一步阐释)






It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题), which is ______________(进一步的说明). He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节). In my opinion, ___________(个人阐述).






This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体,如the whole of the human race). Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在). One the one hand, we must _________________(建议一). It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明). On the other hand, ________________(建议二)  Only in this way can we___________(展望前景).






模板二:图表作文



The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题). The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点). This means that as __________, _________________(进一步说明).






We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一). After ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化), the _____Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化). The figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二). (数据位置,如In the second column), we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述).






Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因). / It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议)






模板三:利弊型作文



Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_________. For one thing, __________can bring ____ to_____________(优点一). For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(优点二).






But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________, among which are ____________(列举缺点). For instance, it can be __________to _____________(举例说明). In addition, many people find it ________(形容词)to _______________(第二个缺点)






When asked to __________, I tend to ____________. This is because I _______________(原因一). Furthermore, _______________________(原因二). Finally, ______________(原因三).






模板四:展望未来型



With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years, ___has____________(引出现象). However, _______ has________________, as____________(提出问题). As a result, _____has ____________________(指出影响).






The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.



First , __________________(影响一). More importantly, ________________(影响二). Hence, I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望)






There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. The first is that the more(比较级)_____, the more (比较级). In addition, we all agree that________________________(第二个原因)



小作文范文举例



1.       投诉信



范文:



Dear Sir or Madam,



I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.



The reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. His friends constantly visit him and he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. Under these circumstances, I find it different to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind on my assignments.



I am sure you will agree that the solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distraction. I would be grateful if you could fond a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.






                                              Yours sincerely,



                                                 Li Ming



2.       询问信



范文:



Dear Sir,



I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in you town. This visit will be part of our school’s social survey project. I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.



First of all, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours? Secondly, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Thirdly, are there any other activities being held in connection with the exhibition?



I would also like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. If so, how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary for it?



I look forward to your reply.



                          



                                              Yours sincerely,



                                                 Li Ming



3.       请求信



范文:



Dear Professor James,



I am writing to request to withdraw from two courses; Introduction to Elementary Education (EDU 602) and Teaching Methods (EDU 619)



.



The reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding I difficult to manage six courses. At the beginning of the term, I was optimistic about juggling my full-time studies and my part-time job (20 hours/week). I really must work part time, so I have no choice but to decrease my course load.






I would also like to request a tuition refund. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused by this change in plans. This decision was not taken lightly.



Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have questions, please fell free to contact me at 277-9144. I look forward to hearing from you soon.






Sincerely yours,



Li Ming



4.       道歉信



范文:



Dear Martin,



I am looking forward to your visit. Just think, after all these years of writing to each other, we will finally have the chance to meet! However, I am sorry that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive.



The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the earliest I can get to the airport will be about an hour after you land. Please wait for me in the arrival lounge. You should be able to have breakfast there while you wait.



By the way, as we have never met I must tell you how to recognize me. I am of medium height and have a small moustache. In addition, I will be carrying a copy of the morning newspaper tucked under my left arm.



Looking forward to our meeting.



                                                Yours sincerely,



                                                   Li Ming



5.       感谢信



范文:



Dear John,



I am writing to thank you for looking after me after unfortunate accident the other day, when I knocked off my bike by taxi. If it had not been for your assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious.



The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.



Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish and to help others, we see very few people practicing what they preach. But you showed by your action that are an exception.



                                                  Yours sincerely,



                                                      Li Ming



6.       建议信



范文:



Dear John,



You ask for advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university. I will try making some suggestions.



University is preparation for your career. You should consider studying a subject which will best equip you to earn a living. Computer science offers more job opportunities than history. We are now in a high-teach age. For the foreseeable future, it would be necessary for everyone to be equipped with computer skills merely to earn aliving!



Of course, you don’t have to devote all your time at university to studying computers and nothing else. I would recommend that you continue reading of history in your spare time. That way, you will find that your leisure hours are enriched while you prepare yourself for a worthwhile career in computer science.



Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies!



                                              Yours sincerely,



                                                Li Ming



7.       求职信



范文:



Dear Mr. Moore,



Re: Waitress position



I would like to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress. I am enclosing my resume, which further details my previous work experience and qualifications.






Not only do I have the qualifications and work experience for this job, but I also have the right personality for a waitress. I am a friendly person who can quickly establish a rapport with people of all ages. The fast-paced environment of waiting on tables suits me, because I enjoy working under pressure. My former boss wad surprised at my efficiency in dealing with customers’ orders.






I hope to meet with you to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant. I can be reached at 463-9234 during the days and 924-6868 after 6 p.m.






Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future.



Yours sincerely,



Li Ming



8.       推荐信



范文:



Dear Sir or Madam,



Re: waitress position



I understand that your center I organizing an international summer camp for overseas teenagers, and you are looking for a bilingual tutor to work there. I am writing to recommend Helen Wang for this post.






Helen was my classmate at Beijing University, where she was an active organizer and participant in extracurricular activities. Thanks to her leadership skills and personality, she was elected Chairperson of the Student Union.






She completed her major-psychology-with an excellent school record. Upon graduation she was assigned to be a teacher in an international high school in Beijing, where she been teaching bilingual lessons for five years. She loves her job and enjoys working with children. This has made her popular among her students.






Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend her as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.






Sincerely yours,



Li Ming



9.       寻找失物信



范文:



Dear Mr. Simpson,



I stayed in your hotel on 23 rd and 24 th of October, in Room 603. When I arrived home, I discovered that I had left one of my bags at the hotel. Could you please check to see if my bag has been found?






The bag is a small black leather case. Inside the bag, you will find several business cards, a small address book, and three copies of a business proposal. These things are not very valuable in monetary terms, but they have a lot of personal value.






I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible, particularly since I need he proposal for a presentation. If you could send the bag to me by courier service, I would be most grateful. I will arrange to pay for the service.






Thank you for your help.



Yours sincerely,



Li Ming



10.   邀请信



范文:



Dear Susan,



I will holding a dinner party at our house on Saturday, June 23, 2005 to celebrate my father’s being awarded the Pulitzer Prize for journalism this year. As you are a close friend of our family, my parents and I would very much like you to participate in the celebration and share our joy.






The occasion will start at five o’clock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a buffet dinner party with a selection of food drinks. At around eight o’clock, a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.



If you are free on June 23, my family and I look forward to seeing you.



Best regards,



Li Ming



RSVP before June 19.



11.   便签



范文:



Dear Sandy,



During the entire school year I have really enjoyed your company and all the time we’ve spend studying and relaxing together. I have talked to my parents about you a great deal and they would really enjoy making your acquaintance. They have asked me to invite you to stay at our home over the summer vacation. I think this would be a great opportunity for us to spend more time together and get to know each other even better. I really hope that you will be able to join me in my hometown for the vacation.



                                                   Yours Sincerely,



12.   备忘录



范文:



Date : August 10,2005



To :   Friends of John



From :A. Buttle



Subject: Invitation to a going-away celebration for John at Rosco’s, August 17,2005, 6:00p.m.



It has recently come to my attention that our mutual friend John is moving to another city this year. In honor of this warm contributions to all of our lives I am holding a going away celebration for him. The event will be at Rosco’s, one of his favorite restaurants, on Tuesday August 17,2005,6:00p.m. I will be making reservations in the coning days so please R.S.V.P. as soon as possible. If you have any questions or need additional directions to the restaurant, please feel free to contact me at my dorm room on my mobile phone.



补充:报告



范例一



Directions:



You have been asked to write a report on water saving issue to the administrative committee of the university.



Task: As a volunteer, writer an one paragraph report, in about 100 words, on the main findings of your personal check-up of the water supply facilities on campus. Include what you consider to be the best measures to effectively correct the situation.



参考例文:



    I have checked the water supply facilities accessible on campus in October,2004 to ease water shortage problem. Most of the hardware still works all right but some equipment is problematic. 124 out of 1036 old-fashioned water taps in classroom buildings and students dormitories were found to be either leaking or broken; water keeps running our day and night in 14 student bathrooms for many weeks, at least wasting 18.5 tons of water every day. Few water meters are installed in student dormitories, resulting in unfair water bill. I think that effective measures be taken to save water, including replacing all old water taps with advanced ceramic ones, installing water meter for individual users, and heightening the awareness of water shortages.



书信作文八大模板



1:投诉信



Dear_______,



I am                        . (自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.  






The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(总体介绍). In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉) to ____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).






I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).






Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.






Yours sincerely



Li Ming






2:询问信



Dear ______,



I am _________________________(自我介绍). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要询问的内容)






First of all, what are _________________________________?(第一个问题) Secondly, when will________________________________?(第二个问题) Thirdly, is _________________?(第三个问题)






I would also like to inquire _________________________________(将最重要的问题单独成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?






Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.






Yours sincerely



Li Ming









3:请求信



Dear___________,



I am writing to formally request to___________(请求的内容)






The reason for ______________is that______________________________(给出原因).I________, so I ___________________________________(给出细节)






I would also like to request ________________________(提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.






Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(电话号码). I look forward to a favorable reply.






Yours sincerely



Li Ming






4:道歉信



Dear ___________,



I am truly sorry that_________________________(道歉的原因).






The reason is that ______________________________________(介绍原因) Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.






Yours sincerely



Li Ming






5:感谢信



Dear______,



I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for __________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in __________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been___________________(没有对方帮助时的后果).






Every one agrees that it was you who___________________________(给出细节).






Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.






Yours sincerely



Li Ming






6:建议信



Dear ___________,



You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______, and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.






In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_________________(建议的内容)






I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.






Good Luck with your_______(祝愿)






Yours sincerely



Li Ming



7:求职信



Dear Sir or Madam,



I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in____________(报纸名称)of________(广告发布时间).






Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a __________(工作名称). In the one hand,_______________________________(第一个原因). On the other hand, __________________________________(另一个原因).






Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at _______________(电话号码)






Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.






Yours sincerely



Li Ming






8:邀请信



Dear________,



There will a ________________(内容) at/in________________(地点) on___________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.






The occasion will start at ___________(具体时间). This will be followed by a _______(进一步的安排). At around______(时间),____________________________(另一个安排)






I really hope you can make it. RSVP before ____________(通知你的最后期限)






Yours sincerely



Li Ming



考研作文必备30句型



1:When + Ved\Ving, 主语+谓语



例如:When using the word “love”, we do not simply mean an attraction to a person, which is a very narrow definition of the word.



When removed from the greenhouse and exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with the petals cast about on the ground.



However, this same healthy flower, when put outside and subjected to rain and storm, quickly dies because it is unaccustomed to facing the natural elements.



2:Only in this way can we …



例如:Only in this way can we help to make the world a better place.



Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personality and ability.



3:Had it not been for the …, … would not ….



例如:Had it not been for the timely investment from the government, our company would not be thriving at it is.



4:As +主语+谓语,主语+谓语



As advances in the electronic media have brought the whole world of scholarship into the home via the Internet and educational courses on TV, the class room is no longer the only place for acquiring knowledge.



变化:as在后面



例如:From this, we can conclude that this bank values skilled and experienced people, as it rewards them with higher salaries.



5:Ving形式作主语



例如:Being surrounded by people of roughly the same abilities and interests can be a great stimulus to acquiring knowledge, whereas studying in solitude at home is boring for many people.



Supporting the elderly is what children have to do to repay their parents.



6:find it +形容词+ to do sth.



People may find it difficult to concentrate on study in the midst of house chores, and disturbances from visitors and telephone calls.



7:be it 句型



People from all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can – be it money or goods – to help their needy fellow citizens.



8:主语+谓语,Ving\Ved



The statistics also tell us that the best paid employees are the managers, earning 1, 200 dollars each; followed by the supervisors taking home 1,000 dollars each.



Being regarded as a burden by their children, they are kicked around like a ball.



9:主语+谓语,for fear of +名词结构\that 从句



例如:The parents do not want them to play outside, for fear of their catching a cold or sickness.



10:By\through+Ving, 主语+谓语



By showing more love to each other, we can make our society a better one.



11:Just as +主语+谓语,so do I +谓语



例如:Just as a racer faces his race with determination to finish it the best he can, so do I face my life.



12:Not only, but (also)



They not only gave us life but have done much in bring us up.



13:with句型



with +n. +prep+n. 结构做补语



The American girl was wearing a Chinese traditional costume, with a big smile in her face.



With +n. +Ved\Ving结构



With teachers specializing in their fields, students benefit.



With+名词结构



With the rapid development of technology and the global economy, the world is becoming smaller and smaller.



With these steps, we can change our society into one out of which comes the possibility that natural resources will be fully cherished.





引申:without句型



In this cartoon, a hen is assuring the public that the eggs she lays are completely round, without any square corners.



Administration departments promise efficient performance for their tasks, without any bribery involved.



14:, which句型



例如:International cultural exchanges are becoming increasingly frequent, which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries.



15:So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子



So precious is time that we can‘t afford to waste it.



16:Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然...)
  例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
17:On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能...)
  例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
18:Among the disadvantages that _______ may bring to  _______ are that + S+V, making +N.+Adj.



例如:Among the disadvantages that cars may bring to our lives are that we could spend more time in traffic jams and we would likely spend more money on operation and maintenance fees, making our schedules tighter and our pockets lighter!



19:There is a real possibility that _________, should there be a _________.



例如:There is a real possibility that we can solve this problem completely, should there be a cooperation among all the parties involved.



20:It is in … as in …. that…



例如:It is in man as in soil that there is sometimes a vein of gold that the owner is unaware of.



21:Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V
Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V



例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。
22:It is only when _______ that ____________



例如:It is only when you nearly lose someone that you become fully conscious of how much you value him.



23:It is +adj. That+主语+动词原形



It is necessary that effective actions be taken to prevent this problem.



24:reason why 句型



例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.
类似的还有those who 结构,如:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.



25:and immediately at that 句型



例如:You must leave her a message, and that immediately.



26:It is no use +ving



It is no use trig to persuade him to accept the gift.



27:The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~



The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)
例如:The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力,你愈进步。
  The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。
28:~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen  ( known/heard/had/read, etc)  
  ~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
  例如:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
  Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
29:It is time +主语+过去式



例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
30:There is no doubt in my mind that…



例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
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