【例3】 Suddenly, being wined and dined was considered insulting, part of the male conspiracy to keep us (female) in our places, so we got out our chequebooks and went Dutch.
【例1】 My point is that the frequent complaint of one generation about the one immediately following it is inevitable.
【译文】我认为一代人对下一代人的抱怨是难免的。
【分析】原句虽短,但要正确分析句子结构也不容易。由于受inevitable惯用法的影响,很多人可能直接将it is inevitable 看作一句话,这样就没有正确分析句子结构,结果必将影响到翻译的质量。事实上,这句话的主干是my point is that the complaint is inevitable, it是following的宾语,指代one generation。另外,本句也要注意complaint…about的用法和the one 的指代(the one generation)。
【例2】 In reality, the lines of division between sciences are becoming blurred, and science again approaching the “unity” that it had two centuries ago—although the accumulated knowledge is enormously greater now, and no one person can hope to comprehend more than a fraction of it.
【例1】 In our travels, we didn’t find the power of women as pervasive in the communes as in the cities.
【译文】在旅行中,我们发现妇女在公社中的影响不如她们在城市中的影响那样广泛。
【分析】这是明显的否定转移,句中实际否定的部分是not so pervasive in the communes as in the cities,而不是如原文所看起来的那样否定find。
【例2】 The composer began his musical career as a violinist.
【译文】(误)作曲家开始了小提琴手的音乐生涯。
(正)作曲家是以拉小提琴开始他的音乐生涯的。
【分析】本句中的as a violinist, 从形式上看,既可作状语,也可作定语,修饰began。那么,它到底是状语还是定语呢?从语法上很难分析清楚,这时要借助于语义,从逻辑关系来判断。如果是作定语,那么应该译为“作曲家开始了小提琴手的音乐生涯”,这不合逻辑:既然是“作曲家”,那么就算是音乐人士了,怎么能“开始小提琴手的音乐生涯”? 所以,只能是作状语,应该翻译成“作曲家的音乐生涯是以拉小提琴开始的”,或者“作曲家是以拉小提琴开始他的音乐生涯的”,这样才符合逻辑。
【例3】 Now some merchants have been exposed to the charge that they reserve their soya beans with ulterior motives.