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According to one of the latest survey, money spent on pets in the city of Paris is as much as $1,000,000,000, which can feed all the Japanese in the world for a whole year.
举例子
我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多，下面这个是最有说服力的。
Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of …, with the following one being the foremost.
With的伴随结构中非谓语动词
举例子—引出例子的方法
在我所听到的，看到的，经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中，最有说服力的是……
Among all the touching facts relating to … that I have heard, noticed, and experienced, the most impressive one is …
除了这个例子，我找不到更有说服力的了。
I can think of no better examples other than …
如果没有改革开放政策,我们可能根本吃不到麦当劳或者肯德鸡.
如果没有希望工程，那些孩子将永远接受不到宝贵的知识。
如果情况继续恶化下去,我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。
虚拟语气
好的情况
假设如果没有，那么。。。
If there were no such policy, we would never taste KFC.
        坏的情况
如果继续下去，那么我们将付出昂贵的代价。
If the situation were to continue, we would pay a high price.
Were there no opening policy, we would never taste Macdonalds at all.
Were the situation to continue, we would pay a high price.
我们人类历史上与爱心相关的例子有很多，希望工程是最有说服力的。
在中国西部有一些家庭，他们是如此的贫困以至于无法资助孩子上学。
尽管他们很可怜，但是来自各个行业的人们向他们伸出了援助之手，这就是所谓的希望工程。
根据一项调查，每年希望工程所募集的资金价值￥。。。，这些钱可以。。。
如果没有这些帮助，那么这些孩子将永远无法得到宝贵的知识，永远生活在黑暗之中。
Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of love, with the Hope Projectbeing the foremost.
在中国西部有一些家庭，他们是如此的贫困以至于无法自助孩子上学。
In the west of China exist some families.
They are so poor that they cannot support their children’s education.
Being so poor that they cannot support their children’s education.
In the west of China exist some families, being so poor that they cannot support their children’s education.
In the west of China exist some families, being so poor that hardly can they support their children’s education.
Pathetic as they are, people (who are) coming from all walks of life began to help them, which is so called Hope Project.

According to the latest survey, money collected annually has reached as much as about $1,000,000,000, which can help 3 million children finish their primary school.

Were there no such precious help, those children would never taste the knowledge and live in the darkness forever.
Were there no such precious help, never would those children taste the knowledge and live in the darkness forever.
个人评价段落
好的现象
取其菁华，祛其糟粕。
Absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks.
        坏的现象？－－解决之。
情况如此危急，解决这个问题刻不容缓。
首先，我们必须制订一些法律和法规。
第二，个人应该被教育。。。
伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，这个问题迟早可以被解决。
The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.
On the one hand, it is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out.
On the other, people should be educated to …
With a proper law and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past.
Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.
总结
第一段描述图画（废话式开头＋倒装描写图画＋总结）
第二段，指出图画的寓意 －－举例子（拓展段落的三个方法）
第三段，发表评论。－－解决方法 （虚拟＋倒装）

有阳光的地方就有阴影
There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. As is shown above, in the sun shine stands a delicate tree, growing vigorously, leaving a long shadow behind itself. Just as the old Arab proverb says, where there is sunshine, there is a shadow.
阐释寓意
Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples about sunshine and its shadow, with the following one being the foremost.The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the sunshine－policies being carried out, bringing its shadow at the same time－the damage to the environment.
According to a survey, money lost in environmental pollution has reached $1,000,000,000, which can …Were the tendency to continue, we would pay a high price.
Were the tendency to continue, our future generation would not bother to think of excuse for us.
个人评价
解决问题
There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. As is shown above, on the thick pile of papers, proudly sits an old professor, seeming satisfied with his success, neglecting the demand of students
阐释寓意
Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.The past decade has witnessed a huge development in education owing to some policies being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost.According to a survey, the number of papers published in 2006 is 10 times as much as that of 1996, with the students’ ability remaining still.Were the situation to continue, we would pay a high price.
个人评价－－解决这个问题
虚拟语气
学校制订法律法规去限制每年发表论文的数量；
老师们也应该被教育去花更大的精力在学生身上。
只有在一个……的环境下，学生才能尽情体会学习的乐趣。
The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.On the one hand, it is essential that rules should be worked out to limit the number of the paper published annually;On the other, teachers should be educated to pay more attention to students.        Only in a prosperous, reasonable atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which students can enjoy their study to the uttermost.
批判应试教育
There has been…
As is shown above, on the playground runs a young man, rushing to the final of the full mark of major courses, such as …and so forth, neglecting the importance of morality and its like. Tired as he is, he has to continue his running as his parents’ wishes.
Simple as…
2
What is the purpose of …?        The author’s real purpose…The past decade has witnessed …
According to a survey, the average students’ ability on study has been significantly improved, with the psychological health being worsened. Nowadays, the college has been filled with a variety of examples of such things, with Majiajue being the foremost. Were the situation to continue, we would pay a high price.

07
There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. As is vividly depicted above, in front of the football stands an athlete, imagining the goal keeper is so giant that hardly can he score the goal; on the contrary, the goal keeper minimizes himself and he cannot keep the net at all. Funny as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as oceans.

What is the intended meaning of the picture? The writer’s real purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to discover what hides behind the iceberg. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in society owing to the reform and open door policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the youth’s lack of confidence being the foremost. According to the latest survey, over 60% youth get defeated when they meet any difficulty, which leads great social concern.

Among all the touching facts relating to confidence that I have heard, noticed, and experienced, the most impressive one is LiuXiang. As the world sport star, he invariably imagines positively that he can win in every hurdle race, never shrinking in front of other experienced players. Had he been afraid of his rivals, never could he make any world record in the Olympic Games. Just as the old Arab proverb says, our final enemy is ourselves. Only in a strong mind believing in ourselves can we hope to witness the ideal scene, in which we can conquer any difficulties and enjoy the struggle to the uttermost.
社会热点问题
1.        介绍背景
2.        产生原因
3.        造成危害
4.        解决方法
5.        预测趋势        关于大学生就业问题
假冒伪劣商品问题
青少年吸烟问题
过渡捕捞问题

00年
The past century has witnessed a sharp decrease in the amount and species of fish owing to over-fishing. Were the situation to continue, never would our future generation taste any fish.

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