2)排比句,比喻句,转折句,长句(特别是那种30~40词的句子,一定要多准备几个,提分的重要因素),名言(过来人都知道,大家都爱用as an old saying goes,"……")。此类句子不用太多,我去年读了五十篇文章,摘抄了约六十个左右句子,可能一篇你一个也找不到很正常,多了也记不住,没用。
3)例子,特别是那种三四句约六七十词而又能用在好几个主题中的例子,我去年摘抄了七个,用上一个。即翟志刚的例子:Zhaizhigang,the first chinese astrounaut to perform space walking,typifies this positive attitude.For two times,he was elected to receive astrounaut training,but twice the chance to be an astrounaut passed him by.Without being struck down by failures,he took effects to overcome his exposed shortcoming and finally succeeded at the third time。55个单词,这种句子都是编书的老师写的,咱们是无论如何写不出来的,类似的还有很多,你只要稍微背一些,考试的时候肯定能用到。
1)I was profoundly shocked by what I have seen in the picture.(此句用在图片比较夸张或者反面现象比较震撼,也可不用。但相对一般开头,此类能给评卷老师一个很深的印象,但一定要用恰当)。
2)As we can see from the animated picture,…… 图片描述 比较常规。
3)若图片上有文字,则必用 Just as the caption in the bottom/right states,……
4)对图片初步做结论:It is obvious that ……若不好写,可不用。
第二段
1)Simple as the it is,this picture does reflect a current social phenomenon that ……表述反映的现象。
2)表述现象原因引出句,Nowadays,……indeed intensify the……,but some subjective factors have a bigger impact on the situation that……
3)正反对比两句 It is not uncommon to hear reports about …….However,it is rare to see……双重否定是个很好的句式。
4)举例子:普通可用 It is reported that
需引用数据可用 According to a survey ,conducted by China Society Ivestigation Institute,……
第三段
1)表明自己观点 To my understanding,though……itself gives little cause for critism,people should ……in a proper way.
2)解决办法 Since the government had recognized the ……,some effective measures should be adopted.
Heavy punishment should be imposed to make irresponsible people pay an unbearable price for their misconducts.
What we need to do is to ……and to use the tool of laws and morality to curb the trend of……此三句灵活运用
3)结尾句::…… would nowhere to hide if everyone can shoulder their own responsibility and ahere to high moral standards.
Through joint efforts from politicians,regulators,entrepreneurs,scientists and every common people,we could creat our ideal society that …… 后面加个定语从句可写出非常长的句子。