[诸葛国际][英研]内部培训教材之写作范例II-1

dorm99

今天传opinion里面的一篇文章吧，还是小白本儿，感觉这一册重点是在思想和选词方面，所选文章用词都恰到好处，但不是一般意义上的三段式议论文，文章感情也不错，对炼词炼句、形成idea很有帮助，害我琢磨了好久（汗！！！）。不过这一册的文章都比较长，数量也更多，比第一本厚了不少，还是只有先一点一点传咯，大家共勉，互相监督哦J。Chapter 1 Writing Samples1Sowing the Seeds, Nurturing Growth and Harvesting the Rewards Some people hold the view that a student's success in university study follows the same pattern as that of farming, which is characterized by the process of sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the reward. As far as my own experience as a student is concerned, I fully agree to this view.To begin with, just as the farmers need to sow the seeds in the soil, so the students need to absorb knowledge into their mind. A stingy farmer who spares the process of sowing will find no crop grow in his field. Likewise, a university student's refusal to knowledge input will result in ignorance. Successful students, however, act in the opposite way. They always listen attentively to the teacher in class. They always read extensively outside class. They never sleep in class. They never idle away their time for nothing.Moreover, whereas the growth of crops needs nurturing, the mastery of knowledge also requires reinforcement. A lazy farmer often neglects fertilizing the soil, only to find his crops in poor conditions and finally have a bad year. Similarly, a sluggish student also fails because he does not bother to consolidate what he acquires in class. In fact, learning does not happen once and for all. This has been proved by the experiences of those successful university students. They review their lessons constantly. They never hesitate to ask the teachers for solutions to their puzzles. They also do a lot of reading related to what they learn in class. Thus they have a better command of knowledge than those who do not take the trouble. As a consequence, the industrious students generally have a greater prospect of success.University study is also analogous to farming in that the more work you do, the greater reward you get. A hardworking farmer who has sowed the seeds and nurtured the plants will finally have a bountiful harvest. Equally, a diligent student who has had an immense intake of knowledge and made it his own will succeed in almost every way. No doubt, he will easily pass all exams. He will beat his opponents with ease in all kinds of knowledge contests. With abundant and profound knowledge he will have no trouble finding an ideal job when he graduates. All this is but a natural result from the efforts he has made.   To sum up, the course of successful university study is similar to that of fruitful farming. Just as the saying goes, no pains, no gains. The farmers need to labor all the way for a good harvest. As university students, we also need to work hard throughout our university life.      
国际关系论坛www.newslist.com.cn欢迎您