标题: 商志2007作文辅导班 [打印本页] 作者: java2008h 时间: 2007-1-2 21:38 标题: 商志2007作文辅导班 与阅读同样重要的作文，一直以来都是被忽视的，很多同学甚至在走进考场之前连一篇作文都没有写过。在我备战考研的过程中，我们惊奇的发现：分值高达30分的作文，是可以通过一天的功夫提升起来的。这不是吹嘘。大家都知道去年的时候，高联的商志老师开了个作文精讲班，在班上商老师讲了一篇大作文和一篇小作文，每篇作文的模板字数都很多，只要根据题目的具体要求加几十个字就可以了
1.观点对比段（没有考过，只需要根据模板仿写1段即可）
There is a public debate (discussion/controversy) today on the issue of ________. Those who oppose (object to) contend that_________. But people favor (advocate) maintain that ________.
2.观点论证段（没有考过, 只需要根据模板仿写1段即可）
When it comes to the topic of_________ (When ____is discussed,) it is presumably proper (reasonable, appropriate, suitable, justified) to cite an old saying (a proverb): ________. This remark (statement, comment, observation) is naturally linked with (be associated with,) a golden rule (a universal truth, a fundamental principle, a glittering rule) in an ever-changing society, that is _________.（后面两个横线分别填“引用1”，“引用2”）
4.举例说明段（04年，01年，举例说明段的重点在例子本身，而例子本身是不能够用模板来套的，所以下面只给出能引出例子的一些模板。考研作文一般的要求都是举出一个例子, sample 而非 samples，这是出题者怕我们不能够举出更多的例子，在考场上，如果我们举出2个或2个以上的例子也是正确的，这是北京新东方讲作文的老师说的。如果有的同学举一个例子也很困难，那么我们可以把这个例子正着说完了反着说，即文登郭崇兴老师所说的“字不够，例子凑，正面写，反面批”，如果有的同学还有困难，那只好采取高联商志老师的办法，在举例子之前多说废话，比如：1）What is the symbolic meaning of the drawing?
2) What on earth can we learn from the drawing? 3）It is far beyond any reasonable about that what the drawer really intends to convey is far reaching /profound. 4) By depicting this image, the drawer attempts to expose/convince us/advocate that_______. 5) the picture reveals a serious problem in________(某个方面),and more and more similar events happened and happening are heard or reported in our society as well as life.）
a．举一个例子：Numerous cases exist to illustrate my point, but one will suffice. 举例
b．举两个例子：Numerous cases exist to illustrate my point, in my opinion, the following two are the most important. 例子1. 例子2.
上面可是我同学总结的部分板子（各种辅导班的都有）
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