1 目的是 recruit volunteers for an international conference on globalization
2 包括the basic qualification of applicant
3 同时也包括 the other information you think relative。
4 落款用" postgraduate association "
5 字数要求about 100 words,文章长度不符合要求的,要扣分。
可风强调,拼写、标点符号和书写时语言准确性的一个方面,在评分时,阅卷者会对书写较差的文章降低分数档次。
㈡ 参考范文
Postgraduate Association
NOTICE
CONCERNED STUDENTS! We are now recruiting volunteers to work for an international conference on globalization. This conference begins on Jan 29th and lasts till Feb 2nd. And we are looking forward to your active participation.
The applicants are required to own these basic qualifications. Firstly, s candidates hould have a strong professional spirit and cheerful personality. Secondly, applicants must have outstanding skills at English listening comprehension and the ability to speak Chinese and English fluently. Finally, students with relevant professional experience are preferred.
For further information, please contact the postgraduate association at 88888888, or send an e-mail to PostgraduateAssociation@sina.com.
Postgraduate Association
㈢ 范文点评
1文章结构
范文的结构完整清晰,紧扣题目要求,层次分明。首先简洁明了介绍了会议的概况并提出欢迎大家踊跃参加。接着对应聘者的条件进行了阐述。最后留下了联系方式,方便同学们获取更多的相关信息。
2 语言亮点
① gain valuable experiences
② looking forward to your active participation 可风启示有不少动词短语中的to不是副词,而是介词,这点往往考生在写作时容易忽略的。
③ a strong professional spirit and cheerful personality
④ prefer这是个写作的高级词汇,可风提示考生重点学习。
㈣ 易犯错误
1 结构错误
由于题目给出的信息比较简短,有一些考生没有留意到“the basic qualification of applicant” 与“the other information you think relative”这两点要求。这些考生一开篇就用很长的篇幅写会议的内容,意义等。(可风觉得,这样写的考生肯定是背大作文的模板背多了,就开始乱套。)
2 表达错误
考生在考试写作中要重点注意避免以下四种表达错误:
(1)应用文格式出错;
(2)中文式英文;
(3)动词形态错误。
可风启示,这三点也是考生在考场上检查小作文写作的重点。