大纲及考题中出现过5种模式
二.现象阐释题
基本模式:以阐释现象概念、分析原因为主
1993年考题 Advertisements on TV
Topic sentence: Today, more and more advertisements are seen on the TV screen. (广告增多)
Outline: 1. Present state. 现状
2. Reasons. 原因
3. My comments. 我的评论
1994年考题 On Making Friends
Topic sentence: As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend.(人类离不开朋友)
Outline: 1. The need for friends (友谊对人的重要性)
2. True friendship (解释真正的友谊)
3. My principle in making friends (个人体验及原则)
要互相忠诚、要真诚的对待对方、朋友之间应该相互信任
1996年考题 Good Health (健康的身体)
Topic sentence: The desire for good health is universal.
Outline: 1. Importance of good health.(解释身体健康重要性)
2. Ways to keep fit. (普遍做法)
3. My own practices.(具体事例)
2002年考题 Cultures-----National and International
Outline: 1. describe the picture and interpret its meaning,
2. give your comment on the phenomenon.
写作提纲:
第一段:详细描述图画信息(外貌、表情、服饰)
第二段:阐释图画文化背景(中国文化走向世界)
第三段:对待两种文化态度
中国传统文化:保存与珍惜
世界不同文化:取其精华,去其糟粕
图画作文有一个基本的特点:
在命题的时候是画面简单,但是语义深刻。
图画作文的审题方式:以小见大,把握象征意义。
这幅画生动地描绘了一个可爱的美国女孩穿着传统中国服装,面带微笑。她佩带着发带、耳环、项链和其它的服装配饰,这些配饰具有中国某少数民族服装的特点。毫无疑问,这种服装为她的美貌增添了东方魅力。
This picture vividly depicts a lovely American girl dressed in traditional Chinese costume with a sweet smile on her face. She wears ribbons, earrings,necklaces and other accessories that are characteristic of the clothes of a certain Chinese minority group; Undoubtedly, the costume has added oriental glamour to her beautiful features.
这幅画所传达的信息远远不止于时尚新潮流,而是附带着文化方面的潜在含义。来自与其它国家的人正在被神秘的中国文化所吸引,这样一个事实表明某种程度上一种文化可以被接受、尊重、欣赏并在全世界范围内分享。换句话说,一个国家的独特文化可以通过世界范围内的经济文化交流走向世界。由于全球化的趋势不可阻挡,越来越多的文化交流将有效地促进共同的理解与友谊 。
What the picture conveys goes far beyond merely a new fashion trend. Instead, it carries cultural implications as well. The fact that people from other nations are attracted to the mysterious Chinese culture indicates that to some extent a culture can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared internationally. In other words, one nation’s unique culture can become international through economic and cultural exchanges. Since the trend of globalization has become irresistible, the increasing communions will effectively improve mutual understanding and friendship.
注意 irresistible的拼写
mutual 共同的
在我看来,民族文化,作为一种无价的精神财富,应当被保存与珍惜。同时我们有充分的理由提倡世界文化。这是因为其它文化中的理念,尽管刚一接触显得格格不入甚至荒谬,可以为我们提供一种观察世界的不同视角。然而,当我们面对一种不同文化时,我们应当充满理智地去取其精华、去其糟粕。只有这样我们才能促进文化的健康发展,并且使我们的世界多元化,多姿多彩,充满生机。
In my opinion, national culture, as a priceless spiritual treasure, should be preserved and cherished. Meanwhile there are good reasons to advocate international culture, for those ideas from the other cultures, controversial or even absurd at first sight, can provide a different perspective for us to observe the world. However, when we are confronted with a different culture, we should be sensible enough to absorb its essence and resist its dark side. Only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our world dimensional, colorful and vigorous.
controversial 有争议的,有不同观点的,格格不入的
perspective 视角
dimensional 多层次的,多角度的
colorful 多姿多彩
vigorous 充满生机,充满活力
写作常见同义词替换
1.危害:
harm -> endanger / damage / threaten
2.获得:
get -> obtain / acquire / derive from
3.解决:
solve -> settle / resolve / tackle
4.问题/危机/灾难:
problem -> difficulty / crisis / disaster
5.著名的:
famous -> distinguished / prestigious / enjoy a high reputation
6.充足的:
enough -> sufficient / adequate / abundant
7.出色的:
good / great -> remarkable / marvelous / impressive
8.严重的:
bad -> serious / severe / grave
9.快乐的:
happy -> delighted / in good mood / in high spirits
10. 很多的:
many -> innumerable / countless / a large number of