标题: 英语写作 [打印本页] 作者: fu4310 时间: 2009-10-29 12:28 标题: 英语写作 1.
2. Just as an old Chinese proverb says, …Just as an old English proverb says, …Just as an old Arab proverb says, …
Ends justify means.
am －－》being was －－》having been
do－－》doing did－－》having done
Being a teacher, I give classes. I, being a teacher, give classes.
我不是一名教师，但是我讲课。
I, not being a teacher, give classes. I, having been a student, give classes.
我过去不是学生，但是现在我讲课。
I, not having been a student, give classes.
汝非鱼，安知鱼之乐乎？
How can you, not being a fish yourself, know the happiness of a fish?
当前后两个句子的主语相同的时候，可以去掉一个主语，将句号改为逗号，并将其中一个动词变为ing,或者having done得形式,being 除表进行时往往可被省略。
如果主语不同呢？ 今天很热。我在家呆着了。
It is hot today. I stay at home. It being hot today, I stay at home.
五大经典句型:倒装 虚拟语气as引导的状语从句 状语从句的省略问题rather than vs other than 介词地点状语提前，后接系表倒装
In the sunshine, stands a young tree.(注意主谓一致)
It is high time ＋that ＋主语＋did（是做某件事情非常紧急和迫切的时刻了。）
问题如此严重，我们必须马上解决这个问题。
The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to ……
It is imperative that laws and regulations should be worked out to ……
Girl as she is, she sings like a man
Simple as the picture is, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.
rather than vs other than
rather than：而不是（万能插入语）
(1) of +n.=adj (2) the poor, the beautiful, the old (3) n.+and its like
。。。和他的同类（作为从一个到多个的推广方法，议论文常用）
表达陌生的词汇
(4) so called +n. 所谓的
owing to
万能关联词in other words, that is to say, as a matter of fact
这个问题迟早会得到解决(消失). It will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past.万能句式结尾
请注意在时间状语从句中的时态问题”主将从现”
段落安排合理 聪明的学生举例子 句式复杂多样 用词有效替换 语法错误较少
负面话题
1 describe the picture描述图画
2 interpret its symbolic meaning阐释寓意（举例子）
3 give your comments给出评论（多为解决方法） 好的、中性话题
1 describe the picture描述图画
interpret its symbolic meaning（不举例子）
举例子
描述图画段落 万能开头句
描述图画 总结 万能开头句
报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注
There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.
Cartoon, photograph, drawing
Magazine, journal
中国正在面临非常严重的(养老/环境/社会)问题
In no country other than China, it has been said, is the problem of more serious.
在过去十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，而下面的问题是最严重的。在……时间中发生了……事件 由于……有了巨大的发展 但同时带来了一些问题下面的问题是最严重的。
The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and open door policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the following one being the foremost
As is shown in the picture,…（后接完整单独句子描写图画）
Shown, depicted, drawn
Picture, cartoon, drawing, photograph
Clearly, Vividly, ridiculously, interestingly…
开始真正描写图画:
在图画中央有 , 它 , 周围有
可以使用倒装
主语与前文一致,可使用非限定性定语从句或者现在分词
介词作伴随结构
As is shown in the cartoon, in the darkness happily stands a candle. It spreads brightness around itself.
Just as an old Arab proverb says, love is just like love, being brighter in the darker places.
Just as an old Arab proverb says, where there is love, there is hope.
As is vividly shown in the photo, in the sunshine stands a pretty American girl, (who is ) in Chinese traditional clothes, wearing necklace and its like, with a sweet smile on her face.
As is shown in the cartoon, on the playground runs a young man, rushing to the final, which is defined as another start one.
Tired as he is, he has to continue his journey optimistically.
In the middle of the picture lies an old man.
He crouches like a football, who is rejected by his sons and daughter.
they are guarding their homes respectively and refusing to take care of their father.
As is vividly drawn in the picture, in the chair sits a young man, having his hair cut as cool as David Beckham.
温室里有一朵柔嫩的小花,
长的很茂盛,
而温室为它遮风挡雨.
当小花从温室中挪出来的时候，它无法抵抗风雨的侵蚀，
很快就枯萎了，任由它的花叶随风飘零。 Stands
Grow vigorously
With 结构
When it is removed from the shelter, it cannot stand the brush of the rain.
枯萎？随风飘零
in the green house stands a delicate flower, growing vigorously, with the shelter protecting it from the brush of the storm.
When removed out of the protection, the flower cannot stand the storm and quickly dies, with its leaves falling in the wind.
尽管图画很简单,但其寓意却是非常深奥的.
Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.
作者的真实目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么.(任选)
The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.
第一段注意事项 万能开头 如图所示，非谓语动词，with伴随结构
总结:注意用词替换 一副图尽量用一个句子表示。意义阐释段落
描述图画中各部分的象征意义 段落具体描述――展开段落
阐释原因(可能性较小)
表示图画中本体与喻体的关系的短语
本体be revealed as喻体
is referred to as
喻体 be associated with本体
refer to, stand for, indicate, epitomize
请注意单复数的使用
小花象征着孩子们
孩子被父母过分保护
父母被比作温室
温室抵抗风雨
风雨象征着现实中的竞争 Be associated with
Over-protected
Be revealed as the greenhouse
epitomize
Symbolically, the delicate flower is naturally associated with the youth, overprotected by their parents, revealed as the greenhouse, protecting them from brush of storms, which epitomizes the intense competition in the real world
拓展段落的方法(一)
科学论据法:根据一项调查表明……
举例子 虚拟语气
根据一项调查表明……
According to a survey
According to one of the latest survey conducted by a certain international organization,…
列举数字后,后面需要一个定语从句来补充说明
每年，法国巴黎市民花费在养狗上的费用价值$1，000，000美元，
可以够日本人吃一年的！ 钱
被花在宠物上的钱
Money spent on pets annually作者: fu4310 时间: 2009-10-29 12:28
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