标题: [灌水]有兴趣的帮我修改一下这段英文... [打印本页] 作者: CampusHR 时间: 2009-4-10 14:59 标题: [灌水]有兴趣的帮我修改一下这段英文... I want to be a graduate student!
I have said that for thousands of times in my heart. I estimate myself from an object, true and fair stand according to my state and proficiency as a would-be failure to the Graduate Students Entrance Examination in the coming year. It is really vague and uncertain for me to be the coming-year graduate student. After all, I am not a student studying in the school any more, and it had been 1 year prompt since I entered into the work after my graduation. It is impossible that you could imagine how many tears and sweat I had shed and how much grievance and chagrin I had suffered in this one year. I don’t want to say that yet. One couldn’t look backwards when proceeding. Everyone should look forward forever! Moreover, my boss has greatly prompted me to this position. Not only my parents, my friends, my colleagues but also the local people and I think I have gotten a comfortable and satisfying work.
It seems that all the terrific days and experiences have passed away forever. I have deserved all the chagrins, depresses, abandonment and infrustration.作者: nicholasxw 时间: 2009-4-10 15:00
the terrific days 不太好吧
how many tears and sweat I had shed sweat没用复数 连后面的how much grievance and chagrin I had suffered 说得太夸张了吧
